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The Human Mechanic Was Just Fixing an Old Robot—Then It Revealed Its Hidden Purpose! HFY



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  1. This is so sad that a big piece of it is missing. They come into the station LOW on fuel then head out without any. Easy fix it go in and edit sat down at the terminal, FIRST thing was to order fuel and supplies then hack the commination looking for what the hack was going on. Over all a good story, but with that error a thumbs down.

  2. I am listening now but my first thought before starting was, What could go wrong starting up a combat robot you know nothing about? We shall see. Edit. The pause between Sentinel and Nine is most irritating. These AI voices are becoming the thing, but I prefer a real person reading instead. Nice start for a story though. If Sentinel Nine was buried for centuries at the end of the war, how old is X Y Lathra? Or is she a robot herself?

  3. How did xylathra know of the robot? Kallow hadn't gone anywhere but his own place. How was the robot aware of xylathra when he'd been offline for centuries? Some pretty major plot holes here. Let this be a one and done if the author can't figure out how to write a story.

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