Aliens
Aliens Horrified as Deathworlders Complete 100 Year Survival
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I really liked this story, Your Clara voice doesn't in my mind match her illustration, but I do appreciate your efforts to differentiate the voices across the various characters. All of that being said a few things that could improve. The "i' in "striations" should be long "i" sound not long"e" sound, 5:28 you said "warriors" the embedded captions said "survivors". Very few issues, especially when compared to so many other SciFi channels in this space. Kudos!
Great narrator ๐
"Wow, this story is insane! I love how Clara and Leon just strolled into this alien death course like itโs a weekend camping tripโmeanwhile, the aliens are freaking out over their sunscreen and hiking poles! The part where they tamed a predator with mango and smoked out wasps with branches had me laughing so hard. HFY at its finestโhumans being total badasses without even trying. Please keep these stories coming, Chandi! Your narration is spot-on, and Iโm hooked. Subscribed and liking this so fast my fingers hurt!"
How many times do you have to tell readers that one of the experts worked in Antarctica?
I mean, sure, but I'm pretty sure it'd impossible to become a space-faring race without mastering fire.
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Don't get me wrong, I really like these stories, but now that I know how they came to be and what the channel is doing with them, I refuse to support the channel. No one channel or one person should have stories that were meant for an entire community.
I love these stories.
Anyone else think the narration voice would make a great character voice?
-100 degree conditions?!! That's 6ยฐ colder than the coldest antarctic temp ever recorded
Your voices were horrible. Sorry couldt get past 5min.
Commander Beyr.. A "singular" individual.. WHY is he described in Plural ?? Not sure who, or what, has taken over this channel.. But I can't deal with this FU of the English language..Please get your S*** together…
There is nothing wrong with the narration.
39:33 GC Observer 2:
"Snap into a Slim Jim Brother!"
These aliens should try cave diving. This would be a doozy of an adventure.
"Give a man a fish and he'll eat for a day."
"Teach a man to fish and He'll eat for life time"
Most of your stories I love but I couldnโt get behind this one, teaching the not so primitive hyper advanced space faring primitiveโs how to make a fire and they scramble back like cavemen confused on how she can control fire. There were more instances that just seem to just sit wrong with me but Christ that fire one really killed the story for me.
Title says it's a hundred years long survival course, but in the story it's only 1 year course.๐ค๐
Hi Chandi, I love your voice. It is so nice listening to a human narrator โค
i am a bit confused about the fact the other races in here didn't even know what cooking is, but i guess under perfect circumstances it's maybe possible that sentient life could evolve with no need for survival instincts or anything like that… but then that brings up the question of why are humans the only race that evolved with survival instincts
And so, that Deathworld called Earth, ended up with a thriving interstellar Survival Tourism industry… Aftee all, why simulate at great expense what a planet already provides :P
16:04 Yeah, im out, i cant finish this one sorry. I enjoy this narrators work for when i am working, his louder voice is great for listening to with environmental noise, but his attempts at high pitched voices absolutely ruin the experience. He simply doesn't have the vocal range to do it. He needs to stick to a more natural voice or bring in voiceogre for the variable tones.
Not trying to be negative, and this is a purely subjective take on my taste, but I couldn't watch this because of the voice over guy. His style was not a good experience, and grated on my ears like nails on a chalkboard
I know you have to suspend disbelief to enjoy these, but asking me to suspend the aliens incapability to "control" fire while at the same time using space ships and FTL capabilities is a little much haha.